Things I like: -The layout (could work well in UDK(Time permiting)) -the structures make sense -your intro works well -It feels dynamic and alive
Things that could be better: -"Bone Yard" the lettering should be modeled out instead of just the maya letter tool, would make it more interesting -the opening camera shot ( maybe make it a track up, instead of a dolly in. To show the detail of the building below it) -model in some pavment and break up the ground a little bit. most can be done with textures but adding in some modeled slabs and grime would make this 100% more interesting.
Other notes: -The lighting is going to take this from good to great -layer your textures when you get them on (always solid advise) -Lighting thing again. I think this would be so much fun to light and texture. try to do a bit of both at the same time. it really helps when working with warm fire tones.
Awesome work so far Roneel!
ReplyDeleteThings I like:
-The layout (could work well in UDK(Time permiting))
-the structures make sense
-your intro works well
-It feels dynamic and alive
Things that could be better:
-"Bone Yard" the lettering should be modeled out instead of just the maya letter tool, would make it more interesting
-the opening camera shot ( maybe make it a track up, instead of a dolly in. To show the detail of the building below it)
-model in some pavment and break up the ground a little bit. most can be done with textures but adding in some modeled slabs and grime would make this 100% more interesting.
Other notes:
-The lighting is going to take this from good to great
-layer your textures when you get them on (always solid advise)
-Lighting thing again. I think this would be so much fun to light and texture. try to do a bit of both at the same time. it really helps when working with warm fire tones.
Awesome work!
-David Stelmaschuk